I think you could have worked this more. The girls faces are kind of puzzled which is nice, but the picture lacks a strong composition. The background is clean, but it lacks any info so it doesn't need to be there, you could have cropped (by zooming or walking) the picture tighter and made more of an impact.
*I think that this situation could have been worked a little more. If you had waited around for some interaction between the two, or even wait until someone gives them a weird look or something. Follow them around, maybe they are taking the paint off later, or are doing touch-ups. Nice find, but be sure that the photo fits into the category (shadows) better next time.
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I think you could have worked this more. The girls faces are kind of puzzled which is nice, but the picture lacks a strong composition. The background is clean, but it lacks any info so it doesn't need to be there, you could have cropped (by zooming or walking) the picture tighter and made more of an impact.
I like this one, that's different. Good face on the left, but I agree with Teresa too. You could have worked it a bit.
*I think that this situation could have been worked a little more. If you had waited around for some interaction between the two, or even wait until someone gives them a weird look or something. Follow them around, maybe they are taking the paint off later, or are doing touch-ups. Nice find, but be sure that the photo fits into the category (shadows) better next time.
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